Doc's Place

© 2008, Michel Grover. All rights reserved.
Chapter 22 | Part 8
Thursday, November 1, 1984

At home, logon and find a message from Le to call the contractor who is building my shop near the airport in Carson City. He has recommendations to discuss. Call and make an appointment to meet him on site tomorrow at eleven and have lunch afterward.

A message from Louise says that she and Marion wanted to talk some more but I left so quickly that she did not have a chance to bring up some of Marion's issues. She asks that I call back. Delete the message.

That evening, Ume arrives to join Sara, Lloyd, Soji and me for dinner. Sara sits across the table from Ume who sits beside me so I notice that they make eye contact repeatedly. Watch them closely, but neither Ume nor Sara makes overt moves to show whether they're getting along.

Lloyd reports that the foundation is growing, with a two-person office in New York City. Aliversal also has one-person regional offices in Chicago, Dallas, San Francisco, Mexico City and Tokyo. Since Lloyd's arrival, the foundation has written almost fifty viable loans in New Jersey and just over two hundred worldwide'most for a few thousand dollars each. Borrowers are women establishing small businesses out of their homes or neighborhood shops.

Casually, I ask Lloyd, "How are you getting along with Julie Meese, the CEO?" Ume and Sara also watch Lloyd's reaction closely.

Thinking for a moment, Lloyd carefully says, "Julie is positive. She represents Aliversal well."

Both Ume and Sara look away, which means they consider Julie's performance poor. Sara explains that Lloyd is the conscience of the group. This is code—don't discuss SIA rough stuff around Lloyd. When I comment that Ume and Sara need someone to be their conscience because neither has one, Lloyd disagrees. She says that Ume and Sara are two of the most moral women she has ever met. Smile, as do Sara and Ume.

Sara says that Mei is making progress preparing for the bank purchase and leveraging the huge loans associated with it. Turning my head, I ask Sara about issues close to my heart, "Security and audit?" Sara opens her mouth to speak.

"Tony is amazing," says Soji, interrupting her. "He showed me how to re-organize the dojo staff so that they train the staff more effectively. Other schools worldwide with which we have student exchange programs have begun asking for information."

"Another example," says Sara as she smiles at Soji then moves her eyes to mine, "This afternoon Tony delivered a price quotation to a German bank for intelligence operations worth more than US twelve million over five years. When we finished the teleconference, they offered us jobs. We're both on track to exceed our fourth quarter goals. So are Lloyd, Mei and Le."

Ask, "Oh, did Le hire someone?"

"Hired a Malaysian woman named Seri Sook Toong," says Ume. "Seri understands information systems and she is a fiend at sniffing out profit potential. Expensive though. We'll bump Le, Mei and Ume's husband, Marlon, to distance their base salaries beyond what Seri demanded."

Sara agrees with Lloyd, adding that in one week, Seri has already paid for her annual salary and first bonus. "Mei hired a Cantonese woman. Her name is Lu Chan and she will be a legend soon. Chan is setting up the investment group."

"Your executives are becoming wealthy," says Ume, "and your foundation is loaning money. What more could you want, Jill?"

Ask about personal security for executives. After a brief description of all that Tony has accomplished, Sara chuckles, "Tony has prepared your personal bodyguard. Wait until you see his scenario for introducing you to his prime candidate."

"When do I review the scenario and the candidate?"

"Tony will call you when the candidate is ready."

"How's Alice Hawkins?"

"Alice is administrative VP for SIA," says Sara. "She handles recruitment, training and compensation."

"I thought she was a director."

"Ume and I promoted her," says Sara. "Alice earned it." When I look at her, she adds, "Alice jokes that the most personally profitable thing she ever did was screw up the hit on you, Jill."

After dinner, Lloyd and Soji prepare the hot tub for us, then say good night and retire for the evening. Ume, Sara and I strip, wash one another and then climb into the tub for a soak. We sit quietly, waiting for Ume to speak. After all, this is a meeting of the board of directors and Ume is the chairperson of the board. Eventually, Ume says, "Let's get something out of the way. No one with a conscience belongs on this board."

Ask, "Are any of our CEOs a candidate for board membership?"

"Tony is qualified," says Sara without hesitation and then adds, "but that's never going to happen because he cannot learn about picode and knowledge of picode is a prerequisite for board membership."

Ume asks, "Why can't Tony learn about picode?"

"Too many ties to his previous employer," says Sara. "Besides, picode will not communicate with a male."

Blink at her and say, "You never mentioned that to me."

"Me neither," says Ume.

"I wanted to have real power—a seat on the board—before I told you," says Sara.

"You bitch," says Ume. "What if I want KMark to inherit my seat?"

"You don't," says Sara. "Besides, now that I have taken control from men, do you think I'm stupid enough to return it? The answer is no, never. I can't change picode anyway."

Ask, "Can't or won't?"

Shaking her head, Sara says, "Picode cannot change, at least not within the current context."

"Why not let picode talk to men?" asks Ume, maintaining eye contact with Sara. "You wrote it; you can change it."

"Let's be clear about this," says Sara, becoming visibly angry. "Picode will never communicate with men. As to why, you know men better than either of us, Ume, since you were once a slave and a whore."

Ume holds a straight face for two seconds before she chuckles. "All true," says Ume softly, "but let's return to why Tony could qualify for board membership if only he weren't male."

"Why, because SIA has executed people?" asks Sara, her eyes on Ume.

"That's part of it, Sara," says Ume. After several seconds, she adds, "Tony is perfectly capable of arranging murder and even wholesale slaughter, if necessary, at the hands of SIA operatives."

Sara's eyes lose focus for a few moments. Looking at Ume, she says, "Tony and I have discussed this. Neither of us will hesitate to visit violence and even death upon our enemies." After another moment's hesitation, Sara adds, "We will try to keep our SIA agents safe but we will not hesitate to send them into danger."

Moving deliberately in the painfully hot water, Ume presses against Sara. With their lips almost touching, Ume asks, "You will send our agents into danger to slaughter our enemies?"

"I will send our SIA agents into danger to slaughter our enemies," says Sara.

"You are sure," says Ume.

"Yes," whispers Sara.

"Who is our deadliest, most effective and most willing agent?" asks Ume.

"I . . . I do not know all of our SIA agents yet," says Sara.

Ume whispers, "You know this one." Watch their eyes but neither woman looks my way. As Ume closes her eyes and begins kissing Sara, suddenly, Sara pulls back with a gasp. Glancing at me briefly, she stares at Ume and breathes, "Jill, an active SIA agent?"

Sitting still, I say, "Just feed me kills now and then, Sara."

"Why?" asks Sara, closing her eyes and opening her mouth slightly as Ume nuzzles her.

"Jill kills to unwind, Sara," murmurs Ume. "Tony arranges the details with our approval."

Leaning her head back, Sara whispers, "Now I know why you work at that dinky Reno casino instead of Pere, Jill. You want to be close enough to strike when threats or attacks come."

Later, we stretch out in front of the fire. Sara leans back against Ume as I face them and Sara rubs my feet. Ume runs her fingers through Sara's hair, massaging her scalp. Looking at me with lidded eyes, Sara murmurs, "I work for a fucking vampire."

"She's always quick," says Ume, "so no one suffers."

Snorting softly, Sara says, "Any other requisites of my board membership?"

"No," says Ume.

"Back to my question about succession planning," I say. "I want two more young women on this board. These women must possess business acumen, knowledge of picode and ruthlessness."

"At the moment, we don't have anyone with those qualifications, Jill," sighs Ume, "However, now that Sara is running things, I have time to work on it."

Inhaling deeply, I say with a sigh. "I've been nurturing an idea for recruiting. Your picode and this new phenomenon, the Internet, make it possible."

"Establishing your idea will take decades," says Sara.

"We have all the time in the world," says Ume. We are quiet for several minutes. "Hired the last software engineer," murmurs Sara, her eyes closed as Ume massages her scalp. "The subroutine project is shuffling forward erratically."

Ume says, "Sara and I have assigned one programming team just to build automated queries that exploit the subroutines, Jill. That will improve the data harvest from picode, which is already far beyond our expectations."

Sighing, Sara tells me that she has taken responsibility for my portfolio. "Your private wealth is at forty seven million, mostly due to Mei's work in stocks. Your Pere and Midori stock will grow by fifty percent to over three hundred million next year."

Ume asks, "Do you realize that within a couple years, Jill, all of your executives will be wealthier than you?"

"Hope so," I mumble. "Do Chan and Seri know about me?"

"Of course," says Ume. "They access the general ledger and they know who owns the stock."

We sit quietly, thinking private thoughts. Sara asks, "How is it going at Doc's?"

"Petty, frustrating and stupid."

"So you enjoy it?"

"Mm." After a while, I ask Sara to tell Margaret to set up a Thanksgiving get-together with my family.

"What does your family think you do here in Reno, Jill?"

"Work at Doc's Place, fix up cars, ski all winter and chase pussy."

Ume and I put Sara to bed. We shower together, towel off and wrap our bodies in a huge comforter with our bare feet sticking out. As we sit watching the fire, I ask, "Are you going to tell me how you intend to spring the trap for Sara?"

"You will know when it happens," says Ume softly.

"How did you find her?"

She waits for a while before finally saying, "Last year, Donny called to tell me about a young woman who had interviewed with him for a slot in the graduate business program. She said more to hide her considerable intelligence, ability and accomplishments than she said to reveal them. I put two SIA field agents full time on her. Once I began receiving information, I fed it to two analyst teams, working separately."

"What did you find out?"

"Sara was interviewing all over the country with graduate business schools that have CSNET hosts. All she wanted was a few minutes' private access to a terminal at each school." Ume sits quietly for a minute or so and then continues, "Sara began working for Donny's accounting firm, so I waited for a problem at Pere that would require an audit. Le and Mei gave us that."

"Were the feds watching her?"

"No, but SIA is expunging records of her interviews. When they do begin watching her, it will be too late."

Ume lay down facing the fire and I spoon in next to her. As we begin to doze, I hear her murmur, "You have much more to learn about both Sara and her picode, Jill. In ten years, when computer networks cover the world, the information harvest will make us rich. In twenty years, we'll be the most powerful people on earth."

"In twenty years, I'll be fifty-five and you'll be fifty, Ume. Sara will be forty-four," I tell her. "We need succession planning."

"Working on it," mumbles Ume.

"I adore you, little one," I whisper.

Chuckling, Ume whispers, "You need me, Jill."

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Doc's Place Chat
© 2008, Michel Grover.
Chapter 22 | Part 8
Autumn 2012

Lucia :
Mic has posted in the left frame paragraphs from Doc's Place, one of his copyrighted stories. I'm moderating chat here in the right frame. I post every day, but I don't post everything. I have formed a secondary group from which I may also post comments.

Suze :
I'm glad I posted what I did at in the last session. After reading this story part, the only regret I have is that I was so mild in my criticism. Jill, Ume and Sara are among the most inhuman people in history. They deserve life imprisonment without the possibility of parole, not the rewards of a rich and full life with the world at their feet.

Carlo :
Allow me to say that I consider myself among the luckiest of men to have lived in a time when I have personally chatted with the "deadliest, most effective and most willing" murderer of all time. I nearly collapsed in an ecstasy of joy when Jill casually says, "Just feed me kills now and then, Sara."

Alan :
I love it when Sara says she works for a vampire and Ume replies, "She's always quick." That qualifies as a great moment in literature.

Raj :

Our Bangalore group agrees with both of you. We also like the irony of Alice receiving a promotion in Jill's SIA organization after nearly assassinating Jill just 3wks before. However, we would like to analyze in detail the brief catfight between Ume and Sara, because it is entertaining and reveals much about each woman's character.

Before discussing their conversation, we should remark upon how significantly the conversational tone changes the moment Soji and especially Lloyd leave Jill, Ume and Sara alone. The gloves come off, so to speak, as both Ume and Sara show their fangs and claws. Jill, who never employs threatening gestures, finds this display faintly amusing.

The three women agree that neither Julie Meese nor Lloyd qualifies as CEO, a position that should qualify for board membership. Tony, the new SIA CEO, qualifies for the board, but only nominally since he's male. Both Jill and Ume pretend surprise at this revelation from Sara, and Ume even pretends outrage, but we know from a previous telephone conversation that Ume already knows about picode's gender prejudice. Ume and Jill won't even share a glance to avoid hinting at their prior knowledge. No doubt, this is part of Ume's web of intrigue to ensnare Sara.

Sara has begun imitating Ume's speech patterns after working with the Ainu woman only a few days. Compare Sara's introductory phrase, "Let's be clear about this," with Ume's similar phrase earlier in the conversation, "Let's get something out of the way." Sara also throws at Ume the worst insults she can conceive by concluding her argument for not changing picode by saying that Ume was "once a slave and a whore," which only makes Ume chuckle.

With the preliminaries out of the way, Ume introduces her concern about Sara's capability to make decisions that will send SIA agents into potentially deadly situations, to kill and perhaps even slaughter. Ume asks for reassurance, which Sara provides.

Ume asks her to guess the most murderous SIA agent's identity. Sara identifies Jill, who has been silent for some time. Jill asks only that they feed her—an expression, she says, and Sara finally understands—board members enable Jill's pathology as long as Jill kills.

Alan :
Fascinating, Raj. Based upon the ensuing discussion of succession planning, do you and the Bengaluru group believe that the board will wait until Jill's pathological yearning ends before bringing in new board members?

Raj :
We do. For example, if Amalie and Lupita do sit on the board one day, they will not have to approve her kills, which means Benny will not have to arrange them.

Maria :
Jill and Ume obviously have been working with one another for 10yrs at this point in the story, so they exchange subtle clues constantly. Sara doesn't notice these clues because the other two women don't even make eye contact, let alone use tone of voice and so on. Trying to participate in such a discussion seems impossible to me, because I'd know these two were conspiring, but I wouldn't know how or about what.

Amalie :

The very thing that makes you nervous, Maria, is what gives Sara reassurance. She knows that Ume is conspiring to entrap her, but she also knows that Ume needs her. As long as Sara gets what she wants—a secure environment where she can develop her ideas and get rich in peace—she is willing to let Ume weave her webs of intrigue.

Maria :
Sara must know that she is giving up a great deal of personal freedom in the process.

Amalie :

I'm sure she does, Maria, but Sara knows what she has done and how capable she is so she knows that some day men will come after her and eventually find her. When they do, she'll lose her freedom anyway. Choosing to join Pere gives Sara more freedom now than ending up in government captivity would give her later. Besides, within Pere, Sara cedes her freedom to women; whereas, continuing to run from the government—the man—would cede her freedom to men, whom she fears and detests.

Maria :
You're right, of course, Amalie, but do you understand my point about how participating in this conversation would be nerve-wracking?

Amalie :

I do; however, we all make these choices as we grow up, enter the wide world and decide what to do with the talents and time we have in life. In definite, specific ways, we give up a little or a lot of our freedom every day. We exchange our freedom for what we want. Most of us are happy to make the exchange if doing so gives us what we want—power, money, love, security, etc.

Marcus :
You have learned much in recent years, Amalie, my young friend. You are growing up before our very eyes.

Amalie :
I feel it is so, Tío Marcus. Gracias.

Steph :
Is this and similar discussion groups the result of Jill's idea for recruiting executives?

Alan :
Yes, this is a narrow example. Jill's idea was for numerous such discussions worldwide.

Maria :
Now that Kili has joined our discussion group and pointed out how to find Jill's reactions and changes, I find myself watching for Jill's reactions to various situations. Did anyone else get the impression that Jill does not particularly enjoy this discussion with Ume and Sara?

Carlo :
I did. Jill just does not seem to enjoy discussing daily operations within her organizations. Jill states more than a dozen demands or questions but all are perfunctory and she rarely presses for details. In fact, Jill seems to ignore almost as many topics as she asks about.

Steph :
Le has told us this about Jill, Carlo. It's not Jill's interest.

Carlo :

Well then, let's discuss a couple issues close to Jill's heart—security and audit. We understand that Japanese Buddhist orphans provide much of Pere security. How young are they when they begin their training? How old are they when they begin providing security? How old must they be to join SIA as a field agent?

Le :
I'll take those questions, Carlo. They begin with the orphanage at 6yrs old and they can begin providing security at 18 if they wish but they must wait until 25 and graduation from college to begin working as a professional bodyguard or SIA field agent if they so choose.

Carlo :
Are they tough enough at 18, or 25 for that matter?

Le :
Oh yes, thanks to Tony, those kids are tough, intelligent, quite happy and fun-loving.

Suze :

For heaven's sake, people, is it not bad enough that Jill, Ume, Sara, Tony and Donna are soulless ghouls who delight in wholesale slaughter? Must we now learn that their organizations intentionally and systematically pass these dark arts of manipulation and murder to pubescent children? Am I the only one shocked by such revelations? Shame on you—all of you.

Kili :

Come now, Suze, must we remind you that organizations—including governments, militaries, religions and businesses—throughout history have taught children the dark arts of manipulation, provocation, spying, prostitution and assassination? You need spend only a few moments researching to find examples in all such organizations and in every age to discover how common such practices are.

Perhaps you'll attempt to deny that no examples of such practices exist in this enlightened, modern day. Perhaps you'll attempt to claim that Jill and her crew could avoid practicing such dark arts just to limit the amount of evil in the world. Probably you'll attempt to claim the moral stance without a single warrant for your empty assertions. Your repeated unwarranted assumptions are beginning to stink like too-long exposed and rotting flesh.

Benny :
Nice thrust with the harpoon, Kili, but don't assume that rotting carcass provides any targets like vital organs or a high-functioning brain. She just surfaces occasionally to repeat mindless platitudes. I'd like to read what your daughter, Vani, thinks of your opinions.

Kili :
My daughter Vani can be demanding. I hope you don't mind but she has something to share.

Vani :

All of you should realize with whom you're dealing as you exchange ideas with my mother. When Uncle Cyril tells you that my mother is tough, he is not exaggerating. She has raised me to be tough as well. Twice a week, Mother has been taking me to dojo since I was 6yrs old. Once a week, she takes me to the small arms shooting range. I fire a rifle one visit and a handgun the next. I've been doing this since I was 9 and I'm quite accurate. I disassemble, reassemble and clean my own weapons.

Recently, I had reason to use my training. My mother had been working for months as part of a team gathering evidence to convict the heads of an organized criminal organization. One member of the organization arranged to kidnap me one day as I stepped out of the school bus. Mother waits for me across the street from our front gate. The bus pulled away as a van approached. The door opened and four men rushed my mother and me—one from the van and three from behind us. Mother drew her pistol and shot one in the face just before another hit her with a taser, knocking her down.

I had nowhere to run but I did have time to kick the man who stepped out of the van door in the side of the knee as he tried to grab me. When he went down, I slid under the van. Scrambling out the other side, I ran to our gate, which has a secret quick-release latch. I ran into our house and my bedroom, pushed a loaded clip into my handgun and reached the hallway just as the van crashed through our gate.

When the men broke through our front door, I was waiting prone on the floor. I shot each of the two men with a double-tap to the chest and one just beneath the nose. The driver tried to back out and drive away as I looked out the door but I shot him twice, once in the ear and once in the neck. Mother called to me from beyond the gate and I said I was fine. She walked through the gate still wearing the handcuffs that one of the men had put on her.

Mother called her team and told them to bring the crime scene investigators. The news media wanted to interview us but Mother would not permit it because of my age. Growing up is difficult enough without my friends and their families knowing I have 3 kills to my credit. Thank you for your attention.

Lucia :
I realize that bringing someone into the group like this is not customary but after reading Vani's narrative, I couldn't resist posting it, which I did without editing. I also received numerous, lengthy response from Suze but I declined to post them because, as usual, they contain not a single original or logical thought.

Kili :

I don't know if any of our readers have approached their 12yr old daughter after a shootout in which she killed half the perps. Let me say that seeing Vani—scratched, bleeding and dirty in her school uniform—walking toward me holding that Sig Sauer P250 Compact 9mm in her right hand was a beautiful sight. I had been running for the van with my pistol in hand when she popped the driver in the temple and I could see the two bodies in the doorway. I realize that some of you want to ask questions of Vani and me or comment regarding this incident, but I hope you understand that we must decline.