Doc's Place

© 2008, Michel Grover. All rights reserved.
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Saturday, September 15, 1984

Peter and I look at one another for maybe five seconds. When he adjusts his position, I say, "You made inquiries about me."

He stands with little effort. Probably plays tennis daily and golf three or four times a week, all with skilled partners. "Perhaps we"ll be more comfortable over here," he says, indicating the couch and chairs as he approaches me to get around the huge desk.

Shove off from the window frame so we walk shoulder to shoulder. He pauses courteously, so I step to a chair and sit. Peter sits facing me across the glass table.

After we study one another for a couple seconds, Peter says, "I seek a person who fits in and does the job, yet operates in shadow. Your name came up, so I made further inquiries."

"A person who fits in." Oh Peter, those are seductive words to one who has never fit in any place. "Operates in shadow," I say.

"I represent Ferro Corporation, which owns Doc's Place, Ms. Price. Are you familiar with Ferro?"

"Call me Jill," I tell him. "I am familiar with Harold Ferro and his corporation." The eccentric, reclusive billionaire died less than ten years ago but his company and his legend still live. I hear he employed Mormon lawyers.

Peter says, "Ferro intends to cut the employee population by half, remodel the old section and then sell Doc's Place." He looks at me as if waiting for questions and then continues, "We want to keep our intention secret until we announce the sale, hopefully a year from this coming spring."

"Two jobs in one," I say.

"Indeed, Jill," he says, maybe getting the feel of my given name while face to face with its owner. "Divert attention from the sale of Doc"s Place while managing communications there."

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Doc's Place Chat
© 2008, Michel Grover.
Chapter 1 | Part 2
Winter 2007-08

Mic :
In the left frame, I'm posting Doc's Place, one of my copyrighted stories. I'll post a part of a chapter, wait for a while so people may leave comments or questions and then post those I find interesting.

Jill :
Okay Mic, good point about the interview with Peter, but what about my drive from Salt Lake City to Reno? My run-in with Melanie outside of Wells or with Trooper Locaccio of the Nevada Highway Patrol in Elko are good stories, aren't they?

Jill :

Yes and I see that you intend to tell them now. For readers unfamiliar with the relative isolation of eastern Nevada highways, look at the map below. The distances are considerable between Wells and north to Twin Falls, Idaho (114mi); east to Salt Lake City (180mi); south to Las Vegas (383mi); and west to Reno (340mi).

Jill :
Anyway, Thursday before the events in the story at the left, I'm driving from Salt Lake City west on I-80 toward Reno. Just past Magna, a UHP trooper hits me with the red spotlight. Pull over, shut off the ignition, put both hands on the wheel and wait.

Jill :

"Good morning, Ms. Price," says the trooper, towering over her. His nametag says Jensen but his expression says serious. He asks, "You packing today?"

Jill smiles up at him. "Yes, Officer Jensen, under the seat and another in the trunk."

"Mind if I check it, please?" Push the steering wheel aside (you can do that in a '63 Thunderbird) and slide over to the passenger seat. Jensen slides in beside me, adjusting the seat back before reaching underneath. "Nice `Bird," he says by way of conversation. "Keep it stock?"

Jill :

"Yep," I say, as I watch him extract the Colt M1911A1 from its holster. Jensen's pecs and biceps stretch his tailored uniform.

Jensen pulls back the slide just enough to see that a round is not chambered and lets it snap back. "Prefer the forty-five caliber myself." He stuffs it into the holster and hands it to me.

"The nine has less rise during rapid fire and holds more rounds," I tell him.

"Spend more time on the range, Ms. Price," says Jensen, sliding out. "The Colt would be more accessible under your jacket while you're driving."

"It'd be in the way when I pick up hitchhikers, Officer Jensen," I tell him as I slide back into the driver's seat.

He opens his mouth slightly but closes it again, probably assuming I'm joking. "May I see your concealed carry permit, Ms. Price?

Lift my ass off the seat and pull it out of my pocket with my driver's license, a credit card and a few folded bills. Hand him the permit. He looks it over and hands it back.

Mic :
Jill accelerates to 62 again. Traffic has been speeding by Jill all morning but now a Wayfreight truck is keeping pace in the passing lane. Jill checks mirrors and sees a line of cars and trucks behind them. Peripheral vision she sees a young guy, one arm out the window, grinning down at her so she guns it. I know that Holley four-barrel. Opens its throat and sucks air as it gulps down fuel. Sees the needle climb quickly before she lifts her foot and lets it cruise at 110. Gas gauge probably moves just as fast the other way.

Steph :
Isn't the speed limit 75 through there? It is around Vegas and Laughlin.

Mic :
This is 1984, Stephanie. It's 55 all over the US, but even school bus drivers know you can drive 7mi over the speed limit without getting a ticket.

Steph :
Probably drove a school bus.

Mic :
Yes, I did. Fixed `em too. And then I followed the kids inside where I taught English, History, Wood Shop and how to argue without a fistfight. Don't you have school-aged children, Stephanie?

Steph :
Ouch, I'm sorry.

Jill :
Anyway, ease the speed down, take the second Wendover exit and pull in to pump Ethyl. Guys are snapping their necks, checkin' out my ass and my car. NHP idles up to the curb as I replace the gas nozzle. Big sumbitch holds the door, touching his hat brim as I walk inside. "Thank you, Officer . . . Locaccio," I say, reading his nametag. Pull a twenty out of my back pocket and drop it on the counter. Turning, I look up at my sunglasses reflected in his and ask, "See that Wayfreight truck pulling in at the diesel pumps?" Turns his head to look and then nods. "You catch him pacing me in the fast lane again, would you pull him over and kick the shit out o' him?" I remember wanting to kiss the corner of his mouth as it lifts slightly.

Give him a smile and walk slowly back to the restroom. Feeling better, I walk out the door, slide in and take off, putting it back on 62 once I'm on the freeway. Sure enough, about 30mins later, here comes Wayfreight. No sooner does he pull along side than the siren chirps behind him, lights flashing. Wayfreight slows down and pulls over.

Lucia :
Lucia here, daughter of Carmine Locaccio, the NHP trooper who pulled over that Wayfreight truck for you, Jill. Cool reading about my dad but what the hey? Really doesn't have anything to do with your job at a casino in Reno, does it? Just sayin'.

Doug :
Peter Marriott's my dad. Sorry he's such an a-hole. My question is why do you have handguns and a concealed-carry permit for Utah? It's of no use in Nevada, right?

Jill :

Good point, Lucia. Just because it's interesting (for some) doesn't make it pertinent. I almost made a pass at your dad. I did notice his wedding band when I met your mom in Elko. Maybe I'll tell that story some time.

And Doug, I wish that I could debate the label you applied to your dad but, according to one Wikipedia definition (a person . . . whose behavior is hurtful, self-centered or particularly abrasive), you are accurate. Doesn't mean I disrespect or dislike Peter; in fact, the opposite is true but that doesn't say much about me, does it?

Regarding the CCW, I have no trouble obtaining a permit to carry concealed weapons in any state because multiple attempts have been made on my life. During July 1984, four such attempts were made, which might make an interesting story in itself some time.

Lucia :
Why write in first person? Isn't that a no-no?

Mic :
Usually yes, but with an iconoclast like Jill, I thought it appropriate.

Doug :
You mention Harold Ferro hired Mormon lawyers. Does that mean Ferro is Howard Hughes' Summa Corporation?

Mic :
Of course not, dumbass. Next question.

Steph :
That's no way to talk to anyone. I don't care if you did teach school. You're still a dick.

Doug :
Take it easy, lady. I can handle it. I'm 26 for hell's sake. Besides, it's funny and just means he doesn't want to get sued.

Lucia :
In Ch1 Pt1, you have Jill imagining Peter's view, which is really Jill's view of herself. That's the problem with first person view: it's limiting.

Mic :
A problem we're all stuck with, aren't we? It's limiting but it's challenging too.

Doug :
Is it my imagination, Jill, or are the Hi-Po troopers watching you closer than the average joe? Is it because people were trying to kill you, and who was it, the mob?

Jill :
You're right, Doug. They were watching me for several reasons, one of which was the recent hit attempts. Maybe I'll go into it some time.