Doc's Place

© 2008, Michel Grover. All rights reserved.
Chapter 8 | Part 2
Wednesday, October 3, 1984

A patter of silenced automatic gunfire erupts from the rocks below me. The bullets slap my bodyguard against the gate and knock him down. Leap to my right and roll down slope into the brush as two shotguns roar one after the other behind me, the shot buzzing and snapping through the leaves.

On my feet, I run down the slope, angling through the trees toward the street and the man who killed my bodyguard. Know where the shooter is because I saw his muzzle flash in the gray half-light. Find him with his back to me, leaning forward against a boulder and watching the gate across the street. An automatic rifle lies on the rock before him. He holds a pistol in his right hand. Glancing up and down the street, I see no vehicle and no other people.

The teenage girl is running at my left, watching me move forward as I set my feet carefully in the soft soil scattered with rocks and small boulders. She is dressed in black running clothes and shoes, her hair in a ponytail like mine. She matches my pace, placing her feet carefully.

The shooter spins about as I run up behind him, both hands reaching behind my right ear. He raises his gun hand as I begin the iaido, slashing across with the katana and slicing him deep from left ear to right armpit. He croaks wetly as I spin about, returning the blade to its saya and completing the iaido. As I sprint up and across the slope, the girl runs at my left, keeping pace with me.

Back in the trees, I turn directly uphill, running hard to get above and behind the men with the shotguns. Once I cross the trail, I turn right again and begin moving carefully down the hill.

One big, barrel-chested guy carrying a shotgun is peering into the trees where I rolled away down the slope. He has an automatic rifle slung over one shoulder and a Colt like mine jammed into his belt. He forces his way through the brush, making a lot of noise. Probably thinks he wounded me. All he has to do is find me curled up and bleeding in the bushes, point the shotgun and finish the job.

Crouch between a tree and a boulder, still as the rocks around me except my eyes, scanning for the second shooter. The girl mimics my stance, watching me.

A few seconds later, a slim guy moves carefully from the trees at the left. He has discarded the shotgun in favor of the automatic rifle. He walks carefully downhill and scans down the barrel as he holds the rifle to his shoulder—an awkward way to walk through the woods.

The distance is forty feet through brush and trees in poor light. Stand still, breathing silently as I watch them move gradually into the trees. Follow them, angling to the left as I catch up. The girl keeps up easily, watching how and when I move.

The slim guy steps from tree to tree, moving much better than his partner who simply shoulders his way through the brush. Slim lifts his rifle to look down as he steps over a small boulder. When he hears movement behind him, he begins to turn, holding the rifle above his left shoulder.

In a single, practiced motion, I draw the blade and slash across from right to left, drawing the blade toward me. My strike opens his rib cage beneath his left arm from his spine to his sternum, splashing dark blood down his side. Continuing the same movement, I rush the big guy, who is holding the shotgun across his chest as he steps up on some boulders to look down the slope. Both my hands hold the blade low and to my left.

All of this happens in a single moment. The big guy turns to face me, startled, beginning to raise the shotgun. Swing the blade up, turning as I open him from crotch to chin. Between my raised arms, I see another guy behind him, his automatic rifle already at his shoulder.

Continuing my turn, the sword in my right hand, I drop and roll behind the big guy. Three distinct thuds punch his body into mine, forcing me backward over the rocks. Tumble to the pine needles on a flat rock below, landing on my feet and then my hands. Sliding backward on the needle-covered slope, I turn and scramble down the hill toward the street. Sheathing the sword once more, I run until I reach the edge of the trees. Sliding to a stop, I look right then left.

The girl stops beside me, her eyes wide. She looks at me and then glances about us.

A white van is idling at the curb, its sliding side door open. Standing beside the van and smoking a cigarette is a young man shivering in the cold as he shifts his weight from one foot to the other and looks nervously into the trees.

Run up to him as he watches me, his mouth dropping open. A flying kick to his chest slams him into the van, where he slumps to the floor. Clutching his chin and his hair behind, I twist his head and hear the popping crunch. Pulling him inside the van, I pull shut the sliding door. Open the driver's door and step out. Pulling the Colt from the back of my pants, I jack a round into the chamber and watch the trail.

The girl walks around the van and stands near the rear wheel, watching me. Her mouth is slightly open as she breathes deeply, catching her breath after running down the hill.

Maybe a minute later, the third rifleman comes running down the trail, watching the ground at his feet, the rifle held high in his left hand. His momentum carries him to the passenger door. He clutches the door handle and looks at me wide-eyed.

Shoot him twice in the face. Stuffing the Colt back in my pants, I run over to crouch beside my Japanese bodyguard—dead. Lift him to my shoulder and carry him to the electric cart. At the guard shack, I pull to a stop and two guards rush up.

One guard says, "They hit one of the Pere entrances. RPG attack on a dark Buick with three people inside. One's on the way to the hospital and two are dead. Obviously, they thought it might be you."

"Who is dead?"

"The Aliversal CEO and COO were in the back seat."

"Damn."

"What happened, Jill?"

"Five men attacked us at the back gate, all dead," I tell them. "Two in a van, three in the woods. You," I say pointing to one, "Secure the back gate area until the police and ambulances arrive." He sprints for the back gate. The other helps me carry the dead guard inside the small guard building.

Pick up the phone and dial 911. Speaking slowly and distinctly, I give my name, location and the phone number of the guard post. Tell her that my bodyguard and I were attacked across the street from the rear gate of Baron Ranch. Send police and an ambulance to the front entrance. Repeat it all for her and then ask her to call Detective Don Locaccio and ask him to come as well. She is asking me to stay on the line until the officers arrive when I set the receiver on the counter.

Removing the dead guard's katana and my Colt M1911A1, I set them on the guard post's desk. His is a fine weapon but it is less than ten years old. Mine is centuries old and I don't want it gathering dust in police custody for the rest of my life. As I walk up to my house, I look around for the girl but, of course, she is gone. Clean the sword thoroughly and lock it away.

When the telephone finally rings, I'm toweling off after a shower.

"Jill, Don here. We're on our way up."

"Door's open." Start a pot of coffee, set out several mugs, leave the front door ajar and get dressed in one of my pantsuits. When Don and the other officers arrive, my hair is still wet and I'm sitting at the counter writing my version of events. My Nevada concealed carry permit is on the counter.

Don walks in with one of the security guards and two other detectives. One is young and other is short and grotesquely fat. He immediately looks around for something to sit on besides a barstool, like a chair, which of course, I do not have, so he waddles toward the pool table.

"Please don't lean on the pool table, gentlemen," I say to the room at large. "It's level and expensive." Turn to a clean sheet and continue writing my narrative.

"You're Jill Price?" wheezes the fat detective, looking around at the empty interior. It's a lot like my life'little in the way of personal touches but plenty of tools and equipment.

"Call me Jill," I say without looking up.

"Uh, Jill," he says with a pronounced wheeze, "Are you injured?"

"Nope."

He waggles fat fingers at the young detective, who sets the guard's sword and my Glock, wrapped in plastic bags, on the counter. "Are these your weapons, Jill?" he asks.

"Yep," I say and push the permit along the counter. "Here's the permit," I add as I continue writing. In fact, I'm almost finished.

The fat one waves an arm. The young detective picks up the permit and hands it to the fat one who inspects it carefully. He hands it back to the detective who returns it to the counter. "Do you carry at all times?" he asks.

"Most times."

"We need you to come down the station to make a statement, Jill," says Tubby.

Initial and write the date on all three sheets of paper. Sign my name and write my address, telephone numbers at work and home on the last page. Standing, I pick up the permit and put it in my pocket. Pushing the pages along the counter, I say, "Here's my statement. I'm going to work. You can reach me at Doc's Place or here." Walk toward the garage.

"Excuse me, Ms. Price," says the fat detective "we need you to walk the scene with us. Explain what happened. Go over your statement."

Pausing, I turn and face him from across the room. "This attack and the one at Pere were assassination attempts, Detective. In a few minutes, the feds are going to walk in here and take over both scenes and all the evidence as part of an on-going investigation. They will contact me. Coffee's ready. The guard will let you out when you're finished looking around." Turn to leave.

He blurts out in a high-pitched voice, "There's a van out there with one man shot and another with a broken neck. In the woods, crime scene investigation found three more men dead. Two are cut almost in half. Another is gutted from crotch to throat like a pig." He sputters out the last sentences. "Five men are dead, Ms. Price. We can detain you!"

Stopping once more, I turn to look at him.

"Joe?" says Don.

"What?" says the fat one.

"Those five out there were paid assassins, armed with automatic weapons, shotguns and .45 semi-autos. Jill doesn't even have a scratch."

"Yeah, so?"

"There are three of us," says Don. "Let Jill go. The feds'll handle it."

Glance at Don, turn and walk to the garage. Back the Buick out and drive to Carter's, where I order a big meal. The owner and his wife, Millie, hunt and fish often. This morning, they have free-range venison as well as lingcod fillets. I order both with juice, vegetables and fresh fruit and tear into it. Everything is delicious. Afterward, I clean up and drive to work.

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Doc's Place Chat
© 2008, Michel Grover.
Chapter 8 | Part 2
Summer 2008

Mic :
In the left frame, I'm posting Doc's Place, one of my copyrighted stories. I'll post a part of a chapter, wait for a while so people may leave comments or questions and then post those I find interesting.

Carlo :

Rough and uneven terrain, poor light, dense trees and underbrush—sounds like an ideal killing field for an iaidoka. Where did you learn to move through the woods like that, Jill?

Jill :

Born and raised in Montana and the West, so I've been near the woods almost my entire life.

Benny :
Don't forget that Jill chose the woods as the mnemonic environment she inhabits in her mind. From that perspective, Jill lives and moves through the woods all the time.

Suze :
5 men are dead and all you can talk about is terrain and ambient light and moving through the woods? What the hell is wrong with you guys?

Carlo :
Hey, I'm already visualizing the movie. Light conditions and terrain are going to make filming really tough. Every portion of that sequence is a separate shooting challenge.

Benny :

The entire sequence is also a study in patience, timing, movement and pressing one's attack. It is Jill's philosophy writ small—like a microcosm in the literal, not the philosophical, sense.

Jules :

Once the girl appears you also have a younger version of Jill's self watching her current-day self so both the movie and the philosophical study have the advantage of a witness—an innocent bystander who also runs along to keep up with the action. Carlo, you could film the entire sequence from the girl's perspective. Benny, you could narrate the sequence from the girl's frame of reference in physical reality. Her thoughts could almost form the voice of a conscience, kind of a one-girl Greek chorus.

Suze :
Did you guys read what I wrote? Does anyone else here think this is terrible? Maria?

Maria :

It is sad that Jill hunted down and killed 5 men but they attacked her, Suze. You're not going to get sympathy for your opinion because these men came after Jill. Even the young driver at the van was an accomplice.

Steph :
Don't ask me either. I'm with Carlo and Jules. It would make a good movie.

Suze :
Marcus? Amalie?

Marcus :
Any court in the country would agree that Jill acted in self-defense even if she had a good idea they were coming for her.

Suze :
I thought you wanted to challenge Jill, Marcus.

Marcus :
This is not a moral or ethical dilemma, Suze. Jill defended herself against an overwhelming force that attacked her without warning while she was going about her business. Any reasonable and prudent person would defend herself.

Suze :

She was going about her own business to encourage an attack, people. She enticed them to attack her and when they did, she killed them one by one—getting as close as she could to each one. I cannot understand why I am the only one expressing moral outrage.

Mic :
If it's any consolation, you aren't.

Suze :
What portion is with me?

Mic :
Less than 10%; closer to 5%, which is interesting. That's about the same percentage as you represent in this group.

Suze :
Do any have new arguments?

Mic :
No, but one asks why Jill didn't escape through the gate and call the police after killing the first attacker. Apparently the driver and van had not arrived at the pickup point yet.

Suze :
That's a good point.

Carlo :
No, it isn't. Only a fool would run across that open street after seeing the bodyguard go down. A second shooter could kill her with ease.

Suze :
Okay, but she could hide.

Carlos :
And wait for three trained assassins to find her in growing light? That's as foolish as crossing the street.

Benny :
So, is this how you debate, Suze? Take a position for no other reason than it's unpopular and then wait for others to provide the support for your position? One might surmise that you're just trying to get attention for its own sake.

Suze :
I realize you think I'm a reactionary East-Coast liberal but 5 people are dead. I feel a sense of moral outrage at these deaths because life is sacred.

Benny :
Whether life is sacred or not is debatable. Since you have no support for your moral outrage, it is a childish plea for attention.

Suze :
Life is sacred, Benny.

Benny :

Tell us why, Suze. Considering life sacred is a civilized concept and civilization has not been around for long. Before civilization, life was not sacred. In fact, life was cheap—cheaper than almost anything.

Suze :
That doesn't mean that life is not sacred.

Benny :
Life is sacred before it became sacred. Is that what you're saying?

Suze :
Yes

Benny :
Marcus or Amalie? Can either of you help this child support her assertion?

Amalie :
Benny is right, Suze. Stating assertions without support makes you seem childish at best.

Suze :
Then I'm childish. Life is sacred.

Marcus :
Is life sacred for any other reason than that you say so?

Suze :
Yes, but I don't know what those reasons are. That does not mean they do not exist.

Marcus :
Is it because you believe that every living thing has a spirit?

Suze :
That's one reason but not the only one.

Mic :
Suze asserts what many people believe. Just because she cannot support her assertions and does it to get attention does not mean that we should ignore or worse yet, eliminate her point of view. Let's agree that Suze rarely if ever supports her assertions and go on with the discussion.

Maria :
Makes her sound like the village idiot.

Mic :
Suze, do you mind being the village idiot?

Suze :
I'm not an idiot. It hurts my feelings that you would ask that.

Mic :
I'm afraid hurt feelings are the price you must pay to participate. This group respects strong assertions and at least the effort to support them. While the group may like you, Suze, they don't respect you. Are you okay with that?

Suze :
Of course I'm not okay with that but what choice do I have?

Mic :
None if you want to participate.

Suze :
Always the threat.

Maria :
It's not a threat, Suze. Participation is your choice.

Suze :
I can participate at the price of the group's disrespect. What if I demand respect?

Steph :
Go ahead. It won't get you any and you'll look even more foolish. Respect is earned.

Jules :
You remind me of the fat detective in the story, Suze. He demands that Jill stay when he has no reason and no ability to make her do so.

Suze :
So now I'm stupid and fat.

Jules :
I have no idea if you're fat or not. I suspect you are because you're mentally lazy, so it would not surprise me if you are self-indulgent as well. You're also a quad so you can't exercise which means you probably are fat. My point is, Suze, that you express opinions without even pretending to defend them because you hope someone else will defend them for you.

Suze :
He's making fun of me. Mic, do something.

Maria :
Jules didn't make fun of you, Suze. He said you made assertions without supporting them as the detective made threats he couldn't deliver.

Suze :
Now you're patronizing me, just as you would a village idiot. Why will you not respect me just because I say that life is sacred?

Benny :
We disrespect you because you assert without support. Why is life sacred?

Suze :
I don't know. It just is.

Benny :
Do you mean that the sanctity of life is self-evident, like that assertion that all men are created equal?

Suze :
Yes

Benny :
Neither assertion is self-evident.

Suze :
Tell me something that is then.

Benny :
Something cannot exist and not exist at the same time in the same way.

Suze :
I don't understand that. Tell me another, simpler one.

Benny :
No. If you won't make the effort to understand one I'm certainly not going to give you another.

Suze :
Why do you hate me?

Amalie :
We don't hate you, Suze. In fact, we like you.

Suze :
I amuse you so you tolerate me but you really think I'm fat and stupid. That's it. If being different means I cannot have your respect then I'm out.

Carlo :
Notice how Jill kills 5 guys and then sits down to a meal of fresh meat. That's great.

Doug :

Surf and turf—just what a woman needs after a morning of slaughter and mayhem.

Lucia :
Mic, speaking of women, we need another one now.

Mic :
I know. Criteria?

Benny :
How about an opinionated Jewish woman who can argue?

Mic :
Hmm, that's going to be a tough one to find. Oh, here we go.

Minnie :

Hello, everyone. I'm honored to join you. I live in New York City and I'm straight but I certainly don't have anything against gay or lesbian people. In fact, I march several times a year for gay rights. I teach English and history at an exclusive, private school in the city. Like Suze, I believe life is sacred because each, individual living thing is unique and deserves to live out its life as best it can. However, those 5 men attack a woman doing her own thing, which turns out to be a huge mistake on their part because she turns on them and snuffs `em all. Can't blame her for that, can we? Any questions?

Benny :
Do you attend synagogue and otherwise practice your faith?

Minnie :
No, but my family and friends are almost all Jewish and we're very social. We get together all the time to debate and argue. It's noisy and crazy but we have a lot of fun.

Maria :
Married? Children?

Minnie :
Neither, but I have a live-in boyfriend who's quiet and unobtrusive and doesn't take up too much time or space. You know, Maria, I don't think I'm going to marry or have children. What am I going to do, be fruitful, multiply and replenish the earth, for god's sake? I mean, what's the point?

Jules :
What do you make of the mystic stuff in Jill's life, the predatory animal dreams and the girl who shows up when she's about to do something horrible?

Minnie :
People who know me say that I am a practical person, Jules, but I have to say that if these thoughts were mine, I'd pay attention to them. Jill has that cat dream and boom, she gets attacked. I wouldn't get defensive about it, but I would pay heed, you can be sure of that.

Mic :
I have an announcement to make. Lucia and I have been chatting off-line and she has accepted the responsibility of moderator. I'm sure she'll move the discussion along but in her own, unique style. I'll still be watching but I'll be busy writing.

Steph :
What do you have to write? The story at the left is already written and we write our own stuff over here.

Mic :
I have other projects.

Alan :
Well hell, you may as well turn moderation of the group over to a woman. Women are taking over the world, right?