Doc's Place

© 2008, Michel Grover. All rights reserved.
Chapter 1 | Part 9
Saturday, September 15, 1984

Walk toward the door and pause before touching the handle. Turning, I see him staring at me with his mouth slightly open, still holding his pen and his notepad.

"Please put a health club membership in the offer," I tell him. "I hear they have racquetball courts." Opening the door, I step out and close it gently.

Stephanie is staring at me in anticipation. "You were in there for a half hour, Jill."

Sit against the edge of her desk. Look into her eyes as the buzzer on her telephone sounds. "See what you think when you go in there, Stephanie."

She stands and walks into the office. Less than a minute later, Stephanie steps out holding several pages from Peter's notepad. Lifting her eyes to mine, she says, "I asked him if you were a keeper. He just handed me his notes and asked me to type up the agreement and contract as quickly as possible."

"I'll wait in Louise's office," I tell her, and walk down the hall. Louise's door is open but she is not at her desk. Sit in the chair nearest the door, extend my legs, rest my head against the wall and close my eyes.

Okay, sign an agreement to receive thirty-k a year to produce a magazine and help executives communicate plus another ninety to divert attention from a sale. Participate actively and knowingly in hiding the truth—lying—for eighteen months. Why do I even consider signing such documents?

Hell, I hide the truth every day. I don't advertise the fact that I prefer women to men as sexual partners with few exceptions. I don't often say that I am an atheist. Few people know that I was a thief. Fewer still know that I am a serial murderer. I can count on one hand the number of people who know that I own stock and assets in excess of two hundred million dollars. Only two other people know I'm here at Doc's Place to divert Peter's attention as my corporation raids his corporation's prize Las Vegas assets.

"Sorry, Jill," says Louise, "Were you dozing?"

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Doc's Place Chat
© 2008, Michel Grover.
Chapter 1 | Part 9
Spring 2008

Mic :
In the left frame, I'm posting Doc's Place, one of my copyrighted stories. I'll post a part of a chapter, wait for a while so people may leave comments or questions and then post those I find interesting.

Jill :

Here, for the first time, we begin to see Jill's own thoughts about herself. She admits to herself—and you, the reader—that she is a liar, a godless person, a thief and a murderer. Not only does she admit to you that she is wealthy, but also that she has an ulterior motive—a hidden agenda—for seeking employment at Doc's Place.

Suze :
This not the typical anti-hero in literature. Jill may have few or no redeeming character traits. We, the readers, are inside the head and heart of the bad guy, or bad woman, in Jill's case.

Lucia :
Not only is Jill probably the bad guy, but also we don't get to hear or see what others have to say or do about Jill. We have no view but hers. In first person singular, we have no relief from Jill's relentless pursuit of her ends. Mic's right about this getting ugly. We could be entering hell.

Ben :
Question for Cyril: How would a Londoner, a business professor, have access to top secret codeword information about Jill?

Cyril :
Jill's not the only one in the private sector with security clearances up the wazoo, Ben. I'm an information analyst and reporter with access to almost anything I want.

Suze :

I consider myself a reasonably bright person with a conscience, yet I face a dichotomy. In the same moment, I am attracted and repelled by Jill's tenacious intelligence and complete lack of conscience.

Okay, Mark Tanner kidnapped Melanie or Linda Peterson or whatever her name is. It never occurs to Jill to do what a reasonable person would do, which is to notify the authorities. She just kicks the crap out of him, secures him and goes on her way. Couldn't Jill show a little concern for Linda Peterson's mother and father or Mark's family for that matter? Why didn't she tell that fine, sweet trooper what she knew?

Maria :
My daughter takes a cerebral view and I respect that but, to my way of thinking, Suze may be right. Consider the possibility that Cyril's accusation is justified. Jill did not deny it. Consider another possibility: Jill is a serial killer or even a mass murderer. She's worth maybe billions by now, she has no criminal record or Ben would have found it, she is an atheist and, to paraphrase Ben, way beyond any martial arts degree. Oh and she has no conscience! To whom does Jill Price answer? Not to me, not to God and not to society. My god, Alan's right. Peter brings in a gunslinger, she's doing her job, and she's already eyeing the bank or heaven knows what else. I've just scared myself.

Benny :
I'm hooked. I gotta find out what happens now.

Raj :
Me too. I'm swallowing the whole tamale as we speak. Photoshot that.

Alan :

To quote Jules from yesterday, smoke a bowl, people. Melanie or Linda or whoever she is saw that Jill lives by a code. Don't you see that? She kicked the crap out of Mark and left him in a condition that the police arrested him and he was convicted. Don't you get the feeling that you can trust her? What if she is a predator, a killer, but with a code? What if the cops and the military, hell the entire government knows she's operating and won't lift a finger because they know that she hunts down and kills one type of human—the convicted, violent felon. What's wrong with that? Hell, let's make a movie!

Jules :

I'm with Alan. I've heard that society produces mass murderers, serial killers, sociopaths and psychopaths. What if modern society is producing a new pathology as Alan suggests? The gunslinger metaphor we've been using works, except Jill has no interest in killing civilians at all. Okay, maybe she doesn't care whether we live or die, but maybe, as Alan suggests, she feeds on violent felons and her success rate is high. What's so bad about that? I'll buy the book and I'll see the movie, more than once.

Ben :
I've known Jill Price for 30yrs but I never knew she hunted and killed violent felons. It doesn't surprise me. Now hear this: all taxpayers are safe. If you're a violent felon and you're not in prison, violate your parole and get back inside before she finds you or you could be red-misted, man.

Les :
I'm with Benny, Raj, Alan and Jules. Oh and just so you know, Mic created me as a character. The reason I don't care if Jill is serial or not is because I don't really exist but I still get to watch. Speak up, Ben. What do you say?

Carlo :
Hey Jill, come to Brazil. We have plenty of convicted, violent felons on the street. If you need a weapons guy, let me know.

Doug :
Red-misted, that's good, Ben. Thank heaven I live in a day when I get to do stuff like this. Almost makes me want to become a defense attorney and keep scumbags out of prison so I can watch Jill the snake-killer go to work. What is she, a freakin' female mutant ninja mongoose?

Steph :

I've known Jill for over 20 years. Suze, Maria spend an hour or a day with Jill. No feeling like it in the world. Say anything you want, she'll never ever get upset. Meanwhile, watch her eyes and her stance—always alert and ready. I've never, even in my own home, felt safer than when I was with Jill Price.

Ian :
Were you in Australia from '68 to '70, Jill?

Jill :
Yep.

Ian :
Tell us about the Blood Cruise?

Jill :
Not much to tell.

Ian :
I'm in, and by the way, I love you. Pop by this weekend and meet me mum. Fancy a June wedding or something small and private? No minister, I promise.

Raj :
Bastardrat, steal my post. Jealousy rage renews.

Ian :
Too bad, Raj. By the way, Lucia, you reviewed but you didn't opine. What's your take on all this?

Lucia :
Jill can paraphrase from the Book of Psalms, Yea, though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil: for I am the meanest motherfucker in the valley.

Mic :
Okay, okay, you got all the guys with that one, Lucia. Good thing you're not in a bar or you wouldn't be able to hear yourself think.