Doc's Place

© 2008, Michel Grover. All rights reserved.
Chapter 2 | Part 1
Saturday, September 15, 1984

Louise escorts me to the elevator in the foyer and says, "This is the employee entrance you'll use each day, Jill." We take the elevator down to the mezzanine level, Louise points to the skywalk across the Row and says, "Park in the garage and come in here. Any questions?" Shake my head, so she says she will mail me a copy of the agreement. She asks if I need a lift anywhere. When I decline, she says, "I'll see you October first, nine o'clock sharp, Jill." She waves good-bye and hurries toward the parking garage.

Downstairs, I walk to the front of the casino and out the front door. The day is still warm, even with the buildings blocking the sunlight, so I turn south and begin walking to the Exchange.

Halfway through the second block, two big college guys fall in either side of me. "Hey there, mama, you look fine. Want some company?" asks the one on my left.

"Hi guys," I say, looping my arms into theirs, "Accompany me to the Exchange?"

"Sure," says the one on my right. "Buy you a drink when we get there?"

"Are you old enough to drink?" I ask Left Arm, who is tall, wiry and light on his feet. Right Arm is forty pounds overweight and clumps forward heavily.

"They already know me at the Exchange," says Left Arm.

"You guys play football?"

"Damn right," says Right Arm, leaning close, the beer on his breath wafting over me. "Recruited for a full ride from Chico State."

On the spot, I decide to dump Right Arm. "I hope you're keeping your grades up," I say, probably sounding like his mama.

"That's not the only thing I got up," says Right Arm.

Removing my right arm, I turn my head to the left and ask, "You with me?"

Inclining his head slightly, Left Arm says, "Yours to command, my lady."

See Right Arm reach for my elbow, his weight on his left foot. Hook his heel with my right foot and shove him hard. He spins away, staggering into the street. "I don't like your buddy," I tell Left Arm, placing my hand on his as we continue.

"He's a little drunk," says Left Arm. "Say, that was a slick move. What's your name?"

"Jill Price, and yours?"

"August Lepartin, at your service, Jill," he says. "Just call me Tan." He pronounces his name Ow-GOOST Lay-par-TAN. He's probably a receiver, with sunburned skin, freckles and red hair. Tan's arm feels like steel cables under his shirt.

"French, huh? Your ID valid, Tan?" I ask. "My daddy's French Canadian, Jill, and yes it is. Born in '63."

"Excuse me a moment, Tan." Turn, grip a roll of skin on his ribs and shove my thumb deep into Right Arm's diaphragm, squeezing hard. At the same time, I bend his middle finger way back and drive my one-inch heel into the top of his athletic shoe as he grimaces in pain. "Okay, you escorted me to the Exchange." Release him, but stay close as he clutches one hand over his stomach. "Now beat it," I rasp, my face in his.

Right Arm slides along the building and staggers away, limping, still holding both hands over his stomach.

Watch him for a moment and then turn to Tan, taking his arm once more to cross the street.

"Jesus Christ, Jill," says Tan, "you wanted him to make a move." When I do not respond, he says, "Remind me never to sneak up on you."

"Hope you guys won so you don't practice tomorrow," I say to him. "He'll need to recuperate."

"He's young," says Tan. "He'll get over it."

"So you lost, huh?" I ask. He holds open the door for me. The Exchange is crowded and noisy on a Saturday night. It's an upscale place for Reno. "Did you at least put points on the board?" I ask.

"Sure," he says. "I'm a receiver. I always put points on the board."

"Jill!" cries Liz from a less crowded corner of the bar, "Over here!"

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Doc's Place Chat
© 2008, Michel Grover.
Chapter 2 | Part 1
Spring 2008

Mic :
In the left frame, I'm posting Doc's Place, one of my copyrighted stories. I'll post a part of a chapter, wait for a while so people may leave comments or questions and then post those I find interesting.

Suze :
Even before the car accident that put me in this chair, I was never athletic. Can you guess a person's weight and agility by walking along side them as Mic describes in the story?

Ben :
I played defensive end and linebacker in high school, college and five years in the semi-pro system before I blew out my knee in '76. I can tell you that you don't even have to be touching a guy to feel his athletic ability or situational control. All you have to do is be in his proximity and you know if he can ace you or if you own his ass.

Carlo :
I agree. I've studied martial arts for 12 yrs. I know within seconds of closing with an opponent what sort of agility and strength he has.

Alan :
You can also tell a lot about a person's physical ability just by watching them move. I've heard people say that even an untrained person could watch Darryl Strawberry walk down the street and know he was a superior athlete.

Steph :
Speaking of athleticism, besides being a song girl at USC, I was on the women's diving team. Anyway, Jill and I went swimming together once. I dived from the high dive and then told her to go. Even though she had never jumped from the high dive in her life, Jill climbed that ladder, stepped to the end of the board and dived almost perfectly from watching me once. She crashed into the water but her form was only a few points off perfect. She's a pleasure to watch and believe me, I know.

Ian :
Sorry to be banal but I must ask. Were you two swimming and diving naked?

Steph :
Nekkid, Ian, not naked, as in we got nekkid together.

Ian :
Damn. Reason I ask is because I looked up your photo on the USC site, Stephanie. You're one of the most gorgeous women I've ever seen in my life. Ever pose nude?

Steph :
Nope. By the way, is that swimming incident coming up in your story, Mic?

Mic :
Yep. I even have the surveillance tapes. . . . Kidding.

Raj :
Dying now, back soon.

Steph :
Much as I try to despise you, you are a lovable dork if for no other reason than you have created this incredibly complex montage in which we all chat.

Mic :
I live for such crumbs that may fall from your table, majesty.

Steph :
Okay, I forgive you . . . for now, but don't piss me off any more.

Mic :
The word joy does not do justice to my transports of delight, my vixen queen.

Maria :
Vixen queen . . . see where this is going.

Les :
No wonder you're not married, man.

Mic :
One's got nothing to do with the other, Les. Okay Jill, up the next morning and. . . .

Jill :
Before continuing, I must interrupt my narrative to tell you something else that's weird.

Doug :
Oh no, not another apparition.

Jill :
No, it's a recurring dream. Well, three dreams. Some time in my teens I began dreaming of three animals: a wolf, a hawk and a cougar. I am one of those in the dream. The first two I don't mind but if I dream the third, I wake up sick to my stomach and then something bad happens.

Jules :
For an avowed atheist, you have a lot of mysticism in your life.

Jill :
Believe me, I don't want it but you're right, Jules. Things do keep happening.

Lucia :
Well stop dawdling and let's see it.

Jill :
Circling along the low edge of a cool decline, my focus snaps to movement at my left periphery. A rabbit hunches in the yellow grass, nibbling at a thistle in a shallow, dry ravine. Tucking my wings, I drop, seeing individual hairs as I extend my claws.

Open my eyes to see it's almost nine o'clock. I love the hawk dream because it always puts me in a good mood. Pull on panties and hit the head. Dressed in a bathrobe, Le sits at the table reading the paper. She stands and hugs me.

"Mm," she murmurs, cheek against my breast. "You're still warm from bed." She sniffs at me noisily and kisses my chest. "Smell good too. Feel better?"

Suze :
Wait a second. Are you walking around topless?

Jill :
Yeah, so?

Suze :
Are you lovers?

Jill :
No. Le works for me.

Suze :
Why don't you put on some clothes?

Jill :
Why?

Ian :
Yeah, why Suze? What are ya, a prude?

Raj :
Thinking about why problem equal innocence sense.

Suze :
What if the kid should walk in?

Les :
She's at school.

Suze :
Are the blinds closed?

Alan :
Who cares? Go outside naked and eat on the back patio.

Lucia :
Mic. . . .

Mic :
I know, I know.

Jill :

"Much better," I say, walking to the fridge. Pour juice in a glass as she begins moving around the kitchen.

"Eggs and sausage, or just fruit today?"

"Are we having lunch?"

"Nope. Lunch tomorrow."

"Okay," I tell her as I sit at the table. "Eggs and sausage then, no toast."

"Any problems on the road yesterday, Jill?"

"Nah," I say as I watch her little body make economic moves.

"You're coming to the office, right?" asks Le, busy in the kitchen.

"This morning," I tell her.

"Good. I`ll show you the security arrangements and the books." She brings the plate over and sets it on the place mat in front of me with a cloth napkin and silverware. I begin eating, wondering if I own any place mats. I'm pretty sure I don't since my dining table is in the garage serving as a workbench. She sits beside me, watching me eat. "You're so skinny, you look like you're starving, Jill," she says.

"I'm fine. Haven't been sick since I was a kid," I tell her, eating steadily.

"Don't those bruises hurt? Like somebody kicked the shit out o' you."

"Should've seen the other guy."

"How are you feeling? Are you happy?"

"Yeah, but I haven't had sex for days. Get some tonight though."

She shakes her head as she looks at me. Reminds me of my mom. "What about Bruno? You two are doing alright, aren't you?"

"Yeah, Bruno and I but he's in Salt Lake, Le." Push the plate aside, finished. These questions bother me. Place my hand on hers. "I've been this way most of my life."

She puts her other hand on mine. "You're the best boss in the world, Jill. Working for you is making me rich. I want you to be happy."

Standing, I lean forward and kiss the corner of her mouth. "I'm happy, sweetie. Thanks for breakfast. I'm in the shower."

Lucia :
Okay, first the bruises.

Jill :
Workouts at the dojo every other day. Always finish up with sparring matches.

Carlo :
Full contact? That's cool. Must be mixed martial arts then, huh?

Jill :
Just about anything goes, depending upon the scenario.

Steph :
Still do it?

Jill :
Nah, been years since I sparred. Still work out every other day though.

Ian :
Bruno? He my rival?

Jill :
Bruno Taliaferro and I have known one another for 40 yrs. We've been intimate for 36 of those years. And yes, Ian, I love him and he is utterly devoted to me.

Ben :
Got `im. Holy shit.

Jill :
Bruno can be intimidating.

Ben :
He's 82 now. Born in '25. Police officer in New Jersey and Utah for 40 years, mostly as a detective. Ogod.

Alan :
I got `im too. Omygod, I see what you mean, Ben.

Mic :
Ben?

Alan :
Get this, people. Bruno Taliaferro joins the Marines at age 17 in 1942. That August, he gets his first tour of duty with the First Marines. Anyone want to guess where?

Maria :
Ogodno, my uncles were there. Guadalcanal.

Alan :
Then Peleliu. Then Okinawa. Jesus, the guy's been in every significant battle that the 1st Marines fought in the Pacific. Discharged in '46 with a Silver Star and a Purple Heart. Oshit.

Mic :
Alan? Ben?

Cyril :
Same thing happened to me the first couple times I read it. Called up again in 1950 for Korea: Inchon and Chosin Reservoir. Bruno came out with a second cluster on his Silver Star, a Bronze Star with two clusters and another Purple Heart. Caught that bullet south of Chosin Reservoir as the First Marines crossed the treadway bridge at Funchilin Pass. It was so cold, Bruno didn't realize he'd been hit until two days later after the First crossed the Army's perimeter at Hungnam.

Maria :
Sweet Jesus. The man is a genuine war hero. Enlisted?

Cyril :
Buck sergeant when he received his honorable. And then he served 40 years as a policeman, mostly as a detective in Salt Lake City. Never even drew his weapon in 40 years as a peace officer. There's a man who deserves two pensions and his current job.

Benny :
Job, at 82? Shouldn't he be retired?

Cyril :
Nope, runs two whorehouses east of Carson City, Nevada.

Suze :
So, I take it that you and Bruno have an open relationship, Jill?

Jill :
Yes. We love each other but we're not monogamous.

Doug :
Well hell, he's not still able to have sex, is he?

Jill :
Oh yes, Bruno can be quite insistent and demanding, which makes us both happy.

Maria :
So, you two have had a sexual relationship for 36 years, which means you were 22 and he was 46 when you began. He must have been thrilled.

Jill :
As was I, especially since we were both virgins of a sort when we met. I had never had sex with a man and he had never had sex at all when I seduced him.

Maria :
At 46? Why had he never had sex yet?

Cyril :
Ugliest man in the world, that's why. Imagine a 6-6, 280 gargoyle. Of course now he's hardly a buck-eighty as you bloody Yanks say but he's still lanky, tall and supremely ugly.

Maria :
What attracted you to one another?

Jill :
I'll tell that story eventually. It's pretty funny, looking back. At least I think it is.

Suze :
Isn't he close to your father's age, Jill?

Jill :
Yep. Pop was born in 1921. Served with the Army in Europe and Korea. Came out as a captain.

Maria :
You haven't told us about your family.

Jill :
I will but not now.

Maria :
You're drawing me in with the stuff about Bruno and your father. I have a real weakness for men in uniform. I can feel myself caving in to you.

Jill :
I haven't brought out the heavy artillery yet.

Jules :
I for one welcome our new masters. Plug me in and let me feed the collective.

Raj :
Masters can beat me with noodles and lavenders jelly.